Caroline Gibbs Poet I do not know?

A Reason To Smile

Can you see the rain smile?
It smiles when we stretch our arms and feels it.

Can you see the wind smile?
It smiles when we run through it.

Can you see the birds smile?
They smile when we look towards the sky.

Can you see the sun smile?
It smiles when we enjoy its warmth in the cold winter days.

Can you see the trees smile?
They smile when we rest on it when we are tired.

You don't need an eye to cry,
you don't need a ear to hear,
you don't need hands to feel,
Neither do you need a reason to smile!

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Caroline Gibbs January 20, 2011 at 9:21 PM thanks for your suggestion andrea, ive taken it into consideration. Suggestions are always welcome. have a nice day :)

Andrea Dietrich January 20, 2011 at 4:24 PM This is really sweet, CAroline, i liked the repetiveness in it. A small suggestion to say they smile in stanzas three and five. LUv, Andrea

Nick Bagnall January 20, 2011 at 4:35 AM What happy thoughts. You've got a smile from me :)

Deb Wilson January 20, 2011 at 4:21 AM Lovely and natural..love,deb