A Realization

Offshore viewing the Milky Way… Feeling part of a greater plan Written for Cyndi’s “Modern Haiku” contest

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S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 11/30/2011 7:45:00 AM

Promises a lot in these brief words..winning wishes

Kash Poet

Date: 11/30/2011 6:42:00 AM

An interesting haiku here Carolyn.Enjoyed.Best wishes for the contest.

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/30/2011 6:35:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku, just read. Best of luck for contest. bl

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/29/2011 7:01:00 PM

enjoyed reading your wrks!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/29/2011 1:19:00 PM

What a beautiful write Carolyn! We are all part of a greater plan, and it's great to see our little part we have in it! Our own Milky Way, beautiful in it's own right, we are like shiny stars within the universe, glowing with precision, wonderful glow!! Thanks for sharing this poem, I really enjoyed it! Incredible work!!

Daver Austin

Date: 11/29/2011 12:20:00 PM

I like your picture at the side of your name. What a beautiful lady! Your Haiku brings out the mystery of the heavens. Am in the process of writing a few Haiku for the season. Great fun! Success in the contest. Love, daver