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A Real Man

You are that burning sun and never brought me rain, You tried to bring me great joy instead of any pain, You treated me with respect and brought me light, Never shamed me and brought me into any night. God only places you with the right person all along, Only to bring you peace and harmony in a song, I will never again question Gods rightful plan, He made sure that I loved you like a real man. ~~~~~ Dedicated to God who always makes sure you end up with the right person all along.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/8/2011 10:05:00 PM
I normally don't enjoy free verse, but I looked at your rhyming quatrains, and found them to be wonderful. Keep up the great work.
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Date: 5/5/2011 9:08:00 PM
This is very true. If you follow God's will in your life, things will be A-okay:) R.M.
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