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A Ray of Sun On a Rainy Day

i stood looking outside listening to the rain  with its long slender fingers tap a tune against my window squeegees in hand i could see  the troops of drops clean the air for a clearer view while on their descent people some walking  holding their umbrellas others running attempting to escape the cruel barrage of knocks to their heads there are a few children  in their rainy day gear locked and loaded steady and ready attacking the puddles with a fierce offensive  crushing any and all puddles  dare question their authority  jumping and diminishing  the enemy ruthlessly the children's joy propels me to thoughts  of the gift ahead a rainbow large or maybe a double arc fully colored vibrant interrupted  my kettle  whistles me over meticulously  i proceed to prepare my rainy day cocoa in my neighborhood it's a law rain? hot cocoa cocoa in hand i return to my show the trees are soaked the rain unrelenting  the plants forced to bend under the weight of heavy rain all the tiny flyers  seek shelter while birds  bomb dive  for their landing worms however are in their full glory out for their unscheduled shower later aliens with lamps shinning from their foreheads will gather to pluck worms  from the earth poor worms my daughters will be glad never having  liked crawlies  of any kind i suppose  they would think poor aliens the rain now is descending violently  apparently in cahoots  with the wind but still no  thunder or lightning  this must be their week off a paid vacation  i gather my cocoa only warm and almost finished i decide to bid the rain  a good night i head upstairs for my  daily shower
Maurice Yvonne September 12 2014 Rainy Day Contest

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Date: 6/23/2016 7:34:00 PM
thinking of you. A ray of sun on a rainy day!!
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Date: 4/3/2015 10:13:00 PM
Armand, looky here. I found a NEW one I had not seen of yours. Back in Setember. I really like how this put me right there with you and what you are doing in your house during the rain. would love to join you for that cocoa! Maybe the shower too. heehee
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Date: 10/10/2014 3:08:00 PM
Maurine, such a creative and imaginative poem! Congratulations on your first place win! Sandra
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Date: 10/10/2014 8:18:00 AM
- Many beautiful 1st place winning poem ..... - I enjoy reading yours Maurice !! - Congratulations! - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/10/2014 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win Maurice. You just keep getting better.
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Date: 10/10/2014 6:02:00 AM
Visiting again to congratulate you, Maurice, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/10/2014 2:46:00 AM
Congratulations my dear poet friend Maurice. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 10/10/2014 2:16:00 AM
woohoo we share the podium with Cas and many other wonderful poets:-) Many congrats Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/12/2014 3:08:00 PM
I dont knoe ehy this poem made me think.of war and bombs,innocent kids and rainbows.Guess I am mislead ..Its as if I find a double meaning to your rain showers amd thunder.Maybe Im listening to too much.news and reading about too much war everywhere : )
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/13/2014 4:06:00 PM
another favo(u) rite!!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/12/2014 6:13:00 PM
you make a good point. i am going to look to make some changes to this write thank you.
Date: 9/12/2014 1:53:00 PM
this brings me joy, maurice.. greeat work!.. hugs
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Date: 9/12/2014 11:44:00 AM
Lovely story told well, Maurice. good luck in the contest
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Date: 9/12/2014 11:34:00 AM
Hi Maurice, double, smack! WOW, I love this... Long slender fingers, can only mean one thing.. The reaper looking in... The tapping was really me...Tagging you... Enjoy your cocoa... LINDA
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Date: 9/12/2014 8:39:00 AM
Well well well...you're the one who used all the hot water.....gather up your worm and we'll go "cat" fishing ......great story
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Date: 9/12/2014 8:13:00 AM
I was enthralled with the story you told Maurice - loved the bit about the worms too - they do worm charming here at a local school - a great contest ... am glad you enjoyed your cocoa LOL the twist at the end is VERY clever. Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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