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A Ray of Light

one moment the sun loses a spark ~ and from that fireball life grows dark one moment steadily turns to night ~ blackness gnaws eating away light one moment life holds plenty ~ despair manifests draining til empty then one moment a baby smiles with fire in her eyes ~ and all’s worthwhile By David Kavanagh

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Komal Walimbe

Date: 7/28/2022 8:30:00 AM

Wise words David! An interesting and a true poem right there! A fav for me! Have a great day!:)

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/28/2022 8:42:00 AM

Delighted to meet you Komal, and thank you for the Fave, sometimes I string monokus together into a poem, this one worked out nicely, but others, well I’d rather forget, cheers David

Bill Baker

Date: 7/25/2022 3:51:00 PM

All true and wise my friend. Great Monokus, David. Bill

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/26/2022 6:35:00 AM

Thank you Bill, from life experience, cannot beat a newborn smile, says so much to the soul without saying a word, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/23/2022 9:26:00 AM

Much wisdom in your Monokus David. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/23/2022 9:37:00 AM

Thanks Tom, I appreciate the visit, weekend warm and balmy, I’ll have a few tonight, have a good one, cheers David

Deb M

Date: 7/22/2022 8:25:00 PM

Ahh David….lovely poem and so very true….a baby’s smile makes it all worthwhile!! Debx

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/23/2022 12:40:00 AM

Heya Deb, it’s like the baby’s saying, you done your bit it’s over to me now, there might just be ultimate purpose in the end, cheers David