A Ray of Hope

I see yonder
A storm gathering on the horizon
And the wind tightening its belt
to show its might
over the land and the sea.

I could feel it in my bones
The chill that numbs
your body, your mind,
As I lay on the good earth -
Forlorn, spent and lost,
Enduring the elements of Nature.

Over me is the foreboding sky,
And snuggling beside me
to get some warmth
is a stray dog for company.

Caught between a looming storm
And the savage sea,
Like an abandoned ship
I toss and sway
and couldn't steer myself ashore.

Like in a dark tunnel
I wait it to abate
to catch a glimmer of hope,
I wait
for a solitary star to shine
And show me the way!


For Russell Sivey's Contest: Enlightenment, Hope and Harmony
04/22/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Burns Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 9:46 PM
Congrats on your win . Wonderful poem.
A   Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 6:43 PM
Hello Abdul, :-) I love the sound of "Enlightenment, Hope, and Harmony." Congratulations in Russell's contest. ~LINDA
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 5:50 AM
many many congratulations Abdul xx
Adhistian Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 12:42 AM
Brilliant poem as a whole though I especially love when you drew comparison to an abandoned ship. Congratulations, Abdul.
Eastman Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 11:05 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win.
Hicks Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 9:39 AM
Congrats on your win! I can see why it was chosen. You took me there, waiting for the storm to pass by - the dog companion was a nice touch. Masterfully done!
Gildersleeve Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 9:04 AM
This is a wonderful poem of hope. Congratulations Abdul on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Hendricks Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 10:52 PM
Nice writing about you and your dog midst the elements. Congratulations on your first place win in Russell's contest. Well done, Abdul. :)
Konos Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 10:22 PM
Excellent
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