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A Ray of Hope

Deep beneath this cover of mortality There are flicker demons battling with me They wait patiently for my impuissant side But a fighter stands on the wings of evil Once held back by a taunting past Of abuse and disregard Hidden away waits a torrid woman Of fluid flesh and bone Heart and soul Rendering love and kindness With a lasting yearning to succeed Now the wounds have since long ago healed But their affects periodical linger I have learned much from my own pain And the strength and courage I’ve acquired instill radiance That will radiate in my light of hope

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/4/2009 12:06:00 PM
Right on Ms. Laura!! They say that pain is the touchstone to spiritual growth but if that were the case I'd have my wings now ... LOL ... congratulations on your wonderful writing being a winner in or out of a contest ... smile ...
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Date: 2/3/2009 5:52:00 AM
Congrats dear Laura on your win in Michael's contest! Absolutely awesome write. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/3/2009 12:21:00 AM
Congrats on your success with this poem Laura.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/3/2009 4:26:00 PM
Smile~What a lovely & strong song of hope this truly is; not only for yourself, but also for others to read & hear!~"Hello Precious & Gifted Laura Mckenzie!"~I hope that your New Year is going wonderfully for You dear lady! Sorry I missed this, but I've been a tad bit busy! I sincerely love the way that You write from your honest & deepened heart & soul~"So Very Beautiful!"~"Have A Wonderful Evening Dear Lady~Love & Warmth Always, John!":)
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Date: 12/31/2008 12:02:00 PM
May your light of hope shine brilliant and steady, so you overcome completely the darkness. May it light your way to a beautiful path ahead. Happiness and peace for you dear Laura in 2009. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/31/2008 5:39:00 AM
Yes, Light does overcome all darkness. I am so sorry you were abused as a child. It must be a very traumatic experience. It is a sad sad thing to happen to anyone but more so to an innocent child. I pray that you can forgive and eventually forget. It takes time I know but Jesus heals. Love and blessings.
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Date: 12/31/2008 3:19:00 AM
I too can relate to this, flicker demons, great phrasing here. yes, they are bothersome, but light shall overcome! Love, Kristin
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Date: 12/31/2008 2:55:00 AM
Lots of truth in this one Laura.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 12/31/2008 2:20:00 AM
There are flicker demons battling with me enjoyed this line yummy poem Laura - a ray of hope!!
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Date: 12/30/2008 6:40:00 PM
I relate a lot...a lot....to this piece! I know so well this 'other side' and how only the healing side of soul (with all it's love) can give hope to the mind. Beautiful. Love, Sara:)
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