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A Raw Dawn of Hope

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Written: July 1st 2023 ______________________________________________________________ The rain poured down with gentle grace. Washing away the tears from yesterday's face, Every drop is a cleansing balm for the soul. Healing wounds and making shivered hearts whole In the dimmest storm, A rainbow waits to form. A vibrant arc of colors so bright, A symbol of hope, a guiding light. Through the clouds, such a mirage, The sun peeks out, casting its gauge. A promise of a raw day Where shadows fade and worries sway, Each dawn bestows a chance to start anew. To embrace the light and bid the gloom adieu. For nothing remains the same, Such as seasons alter life's constant game, The sun will rise, its rays spreading wide, Illuminating raw horizons with pride, Its warmth envelops the land. Chasing away the night's somber hand Gone are the sorrows that weighed us down. Replaced by joy, a contagious sound, Laughter fills the air, hearts are lifted high, As the sun paints the sky with colors that defy The pain of yesterday, now a distant memory, Replaced by a raw dawn of hope and glee. For every storm, a rainbow awaits. To remind us that life rejuvenates, And though we may stumble and fall, We'll rise again, standing tall. So let the rain pour; let it cleanse our souls. It washes away the pain that takes its toll.

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Date: 7/1/2023 10:02:00 AM
The pain of yesterday, now a distant memory, Replaced by a raw dawn of hope and glee. For every storm, a rainbow awaits. To remind us that life rejuvenates, Beautiful and so inspiring ! Some lines are real gems kindling the flames of hope in us. Life is constantly renewed and nothing remains static. The bleak yesterdays will pave way to bright tomorrows. Uplifting poem with a lovely affirmation of the positive.
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