A Ravishing Beauty of Grace and Charm

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A Ravishing Beauty Of Grace And Charm. . Born into luxury and decadence A ravishing beauty of grace and charm Who many a young lovelorn suitor Longed to be betrothed and have on his arm . Her delicate beauty shone like a beacon of light The most beautiful in the ballroom And like a sparkling diamond Catching everyone's sight . Her perfume wafted so fragrant and sweet As bunches of roses placed by her royal feet The presence of an angel As cunning as a fox A paragon of sublime beauty With cascading flowing locks . A sheltered life she did have Her heart in limbo And incredibly sad As her future Incredibly sad , A preconscious flower That evil devoured By a revolutionary Bitter peoples unleashed Power. . Peter Dome©2021.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/6/2021 3:53:00 PM

Hello Peter, she is ravishing a beauty. Probably had a lot of men lined up at her door. Enjoy your evening my friend. x

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/7/2021 6:04:00 AM

Hello Peter, Oh how sad to fall in love and never see that person again. She would be very heart broken. I will my kind friend. You stay safe to . x

Peter Dome
Date: 1/6/2021 4:03:00 PM

Hi Darlene .Hope you are well.Yes many, but none but the most regal and of nobility they're family would allow. the did mix with officers from the forcers, and one of the girls fell in love with an injured one, but it could never be alas. He got better, and she never saw him again. How sad.Thank you.Stay safe dear Lady. X.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/6/2021 2:28:00 PM

'a ravishing beauty of grace and charm'..nice to know i'm so inspiring haha :) xx

Peter Dome
Date: 1/6/2021 2:40:00 PM

You are kitten.A beauty too.Thank you for gracing my post. take care. Pete.X,

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/6/2021 9:30:00 AM

There is beauty in everyone, some external, some inside us. Can one have both? I feel I had. Lovely arguments. ~~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/6/2021 8:05:00 AM

- "Born into luxury and decadence" ... like a princess ... money smells both good and bad, Peter :) - Best wishes for a happy new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Dome
Date: 1/6/2021 2:28:00 PM

Hi Anne- Lise, How are you. Lovely to see you here.Yes money fid them no good in the end sadly.Thank you. take care. Pete x