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A Ramshackle Faith

She wrung away ache With meteor rains; Threw flare coloured stains Into tomorrow's Skies, hoping to flee. She followed star's Patterns too far Into the night. Too far to see. Galaxies help Aid her deep Repair. To Tell her She's not Lone. 12/12/2019 A Ramshackle Faith Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 1/12/2020 1:42:00 PM
That first stanza was a Wow!! Congrats on your win, Amy.
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Date: 1/11/2020 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest, Amy:-) Awesome poem with vivid imagery!
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Date: 12/12/2019 6:47:00 PM
A beautiful hexaverse with a magnetic pull towards the pensive end.
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