A Ramshackle Faith

She wrung away ache
With meteor rains;
Threw flare coloured stains
Into tomorrow's 
Skies, hoping to flee.

She followed star's
Patterns too far
Into the night.
Too far to see.

Galaxies help
Aid her deep
Repair. To

Tell her
She's not

Lone.

12/12/2019
A Ramshackle Faith
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 1:42 PM
That first stanza was a Wow!! Congrats on your win, Amy.
Ibeh Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 7:51 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest, Amy:-) Awesome poem with vivid imagery!
Stiles Avatar
December 12, 2019 at 6:47 PM
A beautiful hexaverse with a magnetic pull towards the pensive end.
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