A Rainy Walk Home

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Written on August 29, 2023

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Walking home with my best friend, Umbrella resting o’er both our heads, Wondering, will the rain never end? Dressed in darkest blues, never reds. Umbrella resting o’er both our heads, Plodding along, thunder softly rumbling Dressed in darkest blues, never reds. This day, the gentle rain, is so very humbling Plodding along, thunder softly rumbling Secreted beneath the cover of the umbrella This day, the gentle rain, is so very humbling My best friend is so kind, such a good fella Secreted beneath the cover of the umbrella Rain pelts the pavement as we trod on home My best friend is so kind, such a good fella Even though it’s quite gentle, it’s still noisome Rain pelts the pavement as we trod on home Wondering, will the rain never end? Even though it’s quite gentle, it’s still noisome Walking home with my best friend,…

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/29/2023 3:37:00 PM

Hello Regina, i also love to walk in the rain. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2023 12:59:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Gina ... even if it's raining - A nice walk under the umbrella with a friend :) - hugs

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 8/29/2023 12:58:00 AM

A lovely poem. Well done.

Deb M

Date: 8/29/2023 12:10:00 AM

So lovely Regina….l love the rain and enjoy a walk in the rain also! Cutest picture ! Debx