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A Rainy Paradise

I wake up at eight, to a persistent tapping Rubbing my eyes, I get up to see what’s happening A gloomy overcast fills the sky Oodles of raindrops falling from a high I walk to the kitchen for coffee or tea While the birds outside play melodies for me I sip, oh so gently the warm cup in my hand Walking outside on the wooden porch to stand I watch all the streams fall off of green leaves Falling to the mini world below in heaves On the creaky old swing chair I rest for a while The peacefulness of it all achieving a sweet smile I close my eyes and for a moment, forget about all From everything in the world, for now I’ll just stall Such a rainy paradise created for me How it falls, oh so wonderfully, for all to see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/14/2023 8:58:00 AM
This is such a lovely poem and I love the title. You have visually described the scene so well that the reader can quite easily picture themselves there and hear the rain fall. Love the line,’ While the birds outside play melodies for me’ ‘Such a rainy paradise created for me’ especially. Really enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing. :):)
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Harmony Lane
Date: 10/15/2023 6:07:00 AM
Thank you so much for the feedback~ <3

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