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A Rainy Day Phantasmagoria

Translucent droplets descending aimlessly

Thudding to the earth, exploding into fluidity 

Transcending in sync with any  exterior element


Condensing intensity with each thunderous blow

Caressing the atmosphere with friction intensifying heat 

All the while, lubricating the possibilities of limitless evolution



Plush carpet of primitive sod
Seducing the blades of foliage budding with comers 
Embrace the earth in a manner of plow and grace

Let Briar patches catch the droplets of reflective charges
Let us flush our cheeks in the breeze of calm
As we knead our nails into agil land
We perspire in the moistness of the dew of creation



The earth is its own composition 
And we as entities must coincide
Because Vitality exist only within the rawness of us all

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/13/2015 2:11:00 PM
This is all rather welcome! I enjoyed reading this poem. I had the feeling that here was someone who had thought about what they were writing and not just writing words. Very good! All the best! :) john
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Lauren Patton
Date: 2/12/2023 8:23:00 AM
Thank you, kindly

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