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A Rainy Day

...Another day has come with a strange noise I rushed out the balcony but I didn't recognize the voice. I felt a wet drop of water looked to the sky. " Are the clouds crying?" The voice would make a lullaby. I looked down to our garden noticed the cries watered it... "I know this water." But I couldn't remember a bit. "It's rain!" my sister shouted out loud she made a really big crowd. It's just a rainy day, it's my best day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/4/2016 12:50:00 PM
awesome
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Date: 2/22/2009 8:31:00 AM
Thanks for the critisizm I needed it I am a awsome speller, I need to proof read my work again thanks Your work is pretty awsome
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Date: 8/24/2008 4:44:00 AM
Lynn - what an amazingly simple yet beautiful poem - God Bless
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Date: 8/22/2008 10:27:00 AM
Beautifuly written...Filled with the beauty of description and imagination....Never stop writing....Sara...
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