A Rainy Day

...Another day has come

with a strange noise

I rushed out the balcony

but I didn't recognize the voice. 

I felt a wet drop of water

looked to the sky. 

" Are the clouds crying?" 

The voice would make a lullaby.

I looked down to our garden

noticed the cries watered it... 

"I know this water."

But I couldn't remember a bit. 

"It's rain!" my sister shouted out loud

she made a really big crowd. 

It's just a rainy day, it's my best day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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A  Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 12:50 PM
awesome
Howard Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 8:31 AM
Thanks for the critisizm I needed it I am a awsome speller, I need to proof read my work again thanks Your work is pretty awsome
Jordan Avatar
August 24, 2008 at 4:44 AM
Lynn - what an amazingly simple yet beautiful poem - God Bless
Zahed Avatar
August 22, 2008 at 10:27 AM
Beautifuly written...Filled with the beauty of description and imagination....Never stop writing....Sara...
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