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The rain is raining all around my sister Bella and me; pounding a rhythmic beat on top of our pretty colorful umbrellas as we hold them high, high above our heads. Utter excitement virtually spreads. Our spoiled hearts and spirits, begins to soar. We are perfectly waterproof wearing yellow and red raincoats and galoshes. Wanting more, more rain to rain all-around, hearing those raindrops falling to the ground. Jumping up and down in puddles making splish-splash sound wishing it will never stop. The rain, the welcome cool, cool rain daring; jumping, giggling, and singing with pleasure. As I fall down on the wet ground with a big Kerplop! With a jubilant bark, Frasier our dog runs up to me, paws on my chest smothering me with wet kisses being a pest. 9/21/2018

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Date: 10/8/2018 2:09:00 AM
That is such a nice memory. Today the i-phone would fall into the mud and self-destruct...
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Date: 9/27/2018 9:40:00 AM
What lovely images you evoke, Eve! Such fun and excitement! I love the rain in early autumn when the temperature is still high; as a child I had a great time running barefooted in the rain in just a top and shorts:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/27/2018 9:34:00 AM
This is fun all around, Eve:)
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Date: 9/25/2018 8:56:00 PM
such a fun read Eve, I love the rain too.
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Date: 9/25/2018 2:14:00 PM
Rain inspires me all the time, in fact i write my best poetry when it rains.. loved your poem Eve...
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Date: 9/23/2018 6:30:00 PM
Cute Eve.
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Date: 9/21/2018 9:08:00 PM
Very beautiful, and appropriate today, is raining cats and dogs here!! :)
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Date: 9/21/2018 5:57:00 PM
Well written Eve, there's something about a good downpour but I'd rather be inside looking out. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 9/21/2018 4:54:00 PM
aww what a charming poem Eve and I love the pic with it:-) hugs jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/21/2018 5:27:00 PM
Thank you, but I'm not sure if it is even the proper form I just wrote..

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