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A Quiet Place

I have come to find my haven in the thicket of night after I've pocketed the sun and shared with it its light The intricate pattern of a flower reminds me of God's lace and here in this forestry of wild, I am never out of place Reveling in the beauty of silence I admire wordless wild and love the symmetry of nature for its utterly compiled There is a quiet place I love to go where all the flowers grow and there I am content to wait, for Eastern winds to blow.

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/16/2022 3:38:00 PM

Nice rhyming and imagery, my friend. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry with us. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/16/2022 7:03:00 AM

Beautiful poetry my friend. Wonderfully invoked wordless place of silence!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/16/2022 1:05:00 AM

A place one can find serenity and love. Wonderful poem.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/16/2022 3:36:00 AM

Thank you Victor, have a blessed day :)

Fj Thomas

Date: 7/15/2022 5:38:00 PM

More than quiet; serene, centering. Beautiful Vie

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/16/2022 3:36:00 AM

Thank you FJ, have a blessed day :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/15/2022 4:52:00 PM

The place your poem describes is a place I'd love to be. A beautiful poem and picture, Mystic Rose. :)

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/16/2022 3:36:00 AM

Thank you Evelyn, have a blessed day :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/15/2022 4:19:00 PM

Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, this sounds like a peaceful place to listen to your thoughts. Hugs...Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/16/2022 4:12:00 AM

Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, I enjoy to listen to the birds sing. in the early morn. My peaceful place is to be by the water. yet i am not there. So I pictures of land by the water. it is peaceful when I stre at it. Better than nothing. Hugs.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/16/2022 3:35:00 AM

Thank you Darlene, have a blessed day :)