Mystic Rose Rose Poet Rhyme

A Quiet Place

I have come to find my haven in the thicket of night 
after I've pocketed the sun and shared with it its light 
The intricate pattern of a flower reminds me of God's lace 
and here in this forestry of wild, I am never out of place 

Reveling in the beauty of silence I admire wordless wild
and love the symmetry of nature for its utterly compiled 
There is a quiet place I love to go where all the flowers grow   
and there I am content to wait, for Eastern winds to blow.

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Bill Baker July 16, 2022 at 3:38 PM Nice rhyming and imagery, my friend. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry with us. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Vijay Pandit July 16, 2022 at 7:03 AM Beautiful poetry my friend. Wonderfully invoked wordless place of silence!

Victor Buhagiar July 16, 2022 at 1:05 AM A place one can find serenity and love. Wonderful poem. Mystic Rose Rose July 16, 2022 at 3:36 AM Thank you Victor, have a blessed day :)

FJ Thomas July 15, 2022 at 5:38 PM More than quiet; serene, centering. Beautiful Vie Mystic Rose Rose July 16, 2022 at 3:36 AM Thank you FJ, have a blessed day :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 15, 2022 at 4:52 PM The place your poem describes is a place I'd love to be. A beautiful poem and picture, Mystic Rose. :) Mystic Rose Rose July 16, 2022 at 3:36 AM Thank you Evelyn, have a blessed day :)

Darlene De Beaulieu July 15, 2022 at 4:19 PM Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, this sounds like a peaceful place to listen to your thoughts. Hugs...Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu July 16, 2022 at 4:12 AM Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, I enjoy to listen to the birds sing. in the early morn. My peaceful place is to be by the water. yet i am not there. So I pictures of land by the water. it is peaceful when I stre at it. Better than nothing. Hugs. Mystic Rose Rose July 16, 2022 at 3:35 AM Thank you Darlene, have a blessed day :)