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A Quiet Commotion

You would never know Just looking at me Sitting there ... Alone in a crowd What's going on In her head ... While they whisper She's shy She's sad She's cold None of that It's simply this ... A quiet commotion From my heart To my mind And back again Swirling, settling On the words Swirling, settling In the ink Down the pen Out to meet With a piece of paper Is this poetry? To me, it sings ... In a beautiful, A wonderful, A quiet commotion

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Date: 11/10/2022 10:12:00 AM
Quite the whisper' quiet in thoughts calm the Spirit, eternally brought; before times ending Open heart, excite sensation bless the start.'
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/19/2022 4:21:00 PM
Thank you, Joe... I will try :)
Date: 11/5/2022 12:21:00 PM
Love this, Kelly ~
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/18/2022 7:24:00 AM
Thank you for reading... Glad you enjoyed it, Line!
Date: 5/1/2022 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful write for Beata’s contest. Blessings to you
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/17/2022 10:15:00 AM
Thank you Eve
Date: 4/29/2022 7:30:00 PM
"A quiet commotion" - Wow! Speaks volumes. Congratulations!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/16/2022 10:23:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 4/29/2022 7:56:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for your participation, making this poetic occasion jubilant. Belated Poetry Day, dear poetess. God bless you.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/16/2022 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Beata!

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