Robert Johnson Poet Rhyme

A Quickie

An ocean filled with bubbles, a soapy sudsy sea.
A world unknown unto itself, destroyed by you and me.
The caustic agitation, beyond imagination.
Reviling empty cages, no words left for the sages.
A pretty playful paridise, neglected by so many vice.

For SKAt's contest.
Written June 21st, 2014 By Robert Johnson

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Archana Garg December 6, 2014 at 6:49 AM Its a great message indeed, but who cares. We just read, appreciate and move on without changing even a single habit of ours. Let's make this world a beautiful place to live. CONGRATS on your great win.

Andrea Dietrich December 5, 2014 at 8:45 PM I am glad to see you got a good placement with yours. Great message for us all. Congrats , Robert.

Debbie Guzzi December 2, 2014 at 8:00 PM A serious subject that needs a lot more attention paid to it! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Jan Allison December 2, 2014 at 1:19 AM excellent write - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich June 21, 2014 at 7:26 PM I love your entry to her contest. It goes along with my environmental one about one huge flame!!! (in last line, I'd say: so much of vice)

Elizabeth Wesley June 21, 2014 at 4:36 PM Hi dear friend, one of my infrequent visits and I had to be here. The message hits home as we continue to destroy our only home. Hugs to you Robert; Love, Lizzie

Barbara Gorelick June 21, 2014 at 1:14 PM The internal rhyme is awesome..hardly ever see that here on the soup. The message ain't badeither. BG

Jerry T Curtis June 21, 2014 at 8:55 AM Like this very much, but keep in mind, it's nothing like one good super volcano and 50,000 years could't cure Robert Johnson June 21, 2014 at 11:27 AM That's a pretty epic thought. :) Thanks for the visit Jerry. Have a great weekend!