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A Quickie

An ocean filled with bubbles, a soapy sudsy sea.
A world unknown unto itself, destroyed by you and me.
The caustic agitation, beyond imagination.
Reviling empty cages, no words left for the sages.
A pretty playful paridise, neglected by so many vice.

For SKAt's contest.
Written June 21st, 2014 By Robert Johnson

Copyright © Robert Johnson | Year Posted 2014

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Archana Garg Date: 12/6/2014 6:49:00 AM Its a great message indeed, but who cares. We just read, appreciate and move on without changing even a single habit of ours. Let's make this world a beautiful place to live. CONGRATS on your great win. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/5/2014 8:45:00 PM I am glad to see you got a good placement with yours. Great message for us all. Congrats , Robert. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 12/2/2014 8:00:00 PM A serious subject that needs a lot more attention paid to it! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 12/2/2014 1:19:00 AM excellent write - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/21/2014 7:26:00 PM I love your entry to her contest. It goes along with my environmental one about one huge flame!!! (in last line, I'd say: so much of vice) Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 6/21/2014 4:36:00 PM Hi dear friend, one of my infrequent visits and I had to be here. The message hits home as we continue to destroy our only home. Hugs to you Robert; Love, Lizzie Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 6/21/2014 1:14:00 PM The internal rhyme is awesome..hardly ever see that here on the soup. The message ain't badeither. BG Login to Reply

Jerry T Curtis Date: 6/21/2014 8:55:00 AM Like this very much, but keep in mind, it's nothing like one good super volcano and 50,000 years could't cure Login to Reply Robert Johnson Date: 6/21/2014 11:27:00 AM That's a pretty epic thought. :) Thanks for the visit Jerry. Have a great weekend!