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A Quickie

An ocean filled with bubbles, a soapy sudsy sea. A world unknown unto itself, destroyed by you and me. The caustic agitation, beyond imagination. Reviling empty cages, no words left for the sages. A pretty playful paridise, neglected by so many vice. For SKAt's contest. Written June 21st, 2014 By Robert Johnson

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Archana Garg

Date: 12/6/2014 6:49:00 AM

Its a great message indeed, but who cares. We just read, appreciate and move on without changing even a single habit of ours. Let's make this world a beautiful place to live. CONGRATS on your great win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2014 8:45:00 PM

I am glad to see you got a good placement with yours. Great message for us all. Congrats , Robert.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/2/2014 8:00:00 PM

A serious subject that needs a lot more attention paid to it! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Jan Allison

Date: 12/2/2014 1:19:00 AM

excellent write - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2014 7:26:00 PM

I love your entry to her contest. It goes along with my environmental one about one huge flame!!! (in last line, I'd say: so much of vice)

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/21/2014 4:36:00 PM

Hi dear friend, one of my infrequent visits and I had to be here. The message hits home as we continue to destroy our only home. Hugs to you Robert; Love, Lizzie

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/21/2014 1:14:00 PM

The internal rhyme is awesome..hardly ever see that here on the soup. The message ain't badeither. BG

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 6/21/2014 8:55:00 AM

Like this very much, but keep in mind, it's nothing like one good super volcano and 50,000 years could't cure

Robert Johnson
Date: 6/21/2014 11:27:00 AM

That's a pretty epic thought. :) Thanks for the visit Jerry. Have a great weekend!