Mohan Chutani Poet Rhyme

A Quickie

Warm ocean currents quick they transcend
Into bubbles colorful, they joyously blend
Entrapping shine of light in their graying bend
Will be forcefully swept by wind ‘n cloud they lend
It takes no time for them to do a quickie in the end

I float around you clinging on to your base
Hoping to get entrapped in warm embrace
Daring to challenge your unquenched crave
Form a tender bond to bring joy ‘n grace 
Quickly before my energies get displaced


Date: 20.6.2014

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Andrea Dietrich December 5, 2014 at 9:09 PM very nice, Mohan. congrats. It's only HM probably because you did more than five lines.

Jan Allison December 2, 2014 at 1:47 AM beautiful imagery Mohan - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan x

Anne-Lise Andresen June 24, 2014 at 9:31 AM - Bravo !!! - Perfect for this contest, Mohan :) - Very well done! - Good luck! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Mohan Chutani June 24, 2014 at 9:53 AM Thanx Anne for dropping by and wishing me. Mohan

Eileen Manassian June 24, 2014 at 2:51 AM Very wonderful write, Mohan. I loved that last line...There must always be time for a quickie! ;) Thanks for your visit to my work and your sweet compliment. Mohan Chutani June 24, 2014 at 9:13 AM Thanks for coming and enjoying my write. Mohan

Joseph May June 23, 2014 at 8:49 PM Very nice write ....good luck in the contest Mohan Chutani June 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM Joseph, Thanks for your good wishes. Mohan

Paul Callus June 23, 2014 at 3:07 PM Very good take on bubbles, Mohan! Glad I stopped to read this one. gl in contest. // paul Mohan Chutani June 23, 2014 at 11:59 PM Thanks Paul for your valued encouragement. Mohan

Ralph Sergi June 22, 2014 at 7:24 AM Hi Mohan, nice to know you. A brief but lovely flowing poem of ocean currents. Good Luck! Mohan Chutani June 22, 2014 at 7:39 AM Thanx Ralph for your wishes. Mohan

Carolyn Devonshire June 22, 2014 at 5:23 AM Dear Mohan, I love the way you describe the bubbles capturing the sun. Indeed, they disappear like a "quickie." Great entry for the contest, my friend. Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn Mohan Chutani June 22, 2014 at 7:40 AM Thanks for your wishes Carolyn. Mohan

Cecilia Macfarlane June 21, 2014 at 8:47 PM Terrific write Mohan : ) Mohan Chutani June 21, 2014 at 9:41 PM Thanks Cecilia for your visit and encouragement. Mohan

Scott Thirtyseven June 21, 2014 at 5:30 PM Oh I looked at that competition, and now reading this I'm glad I didn't enter. Nice write, all the best with the comp. Mohan Chutani June 21, 2014 at 7:13 PM Thanx Scott for visiting and for your best wishes. Mohan

Nette Onclaud June 21, 2014 at 3:01 PM what a smoothie for skat's challenge, mohan... i was charmed!. huggs Mohan Chutani June 21, 2014 at 7:15 PM Thank you Nette. will be glad if Skat also falls for it. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2014 at 10:44 PM this is a COOL Quickie. Way to do her contest. Mohan Chutani June 21, 2014 at 1:12 AM Hope so Andrea.

Casarah Nance June 20, 2014 at 7:10 AM Perfectly descriptive! Well done:) Ihope to see this on the winners list Mohan :) Mohan Chutani June 20, 2014 at 7:12 AM Thanks Casarah, for your wishes. Mohan

Dr. Vandana Sharma June 20, 2014 at 6:05 AM Very intelligently done!! Good luck. Mohan Chutani June 20, 2014 at 7:13 AM Thanks Vandana.