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A Quickie

Warm ocean currents quick they transcend Into bubbles colorful, they joyously blend Entrapping shine of light in their graying bend Will be forcefully swept by wind ‘n cloud they lend It takes no time for them to do a quickie in the end I float around you clinging on to your base Hoping to get entrapped in warm embrace Daring to challenge your unquenched crave Form a tender bond to bring joy ‘n grace Quickly before my energies get displaced Date: 20.6.2014

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Date: 12/5/2014 9:09:00 PM
very nice, Mohan. congrats. It's only HM probably because you did more than five lines.
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Date: 12/2/2014 1:47:00 AM
beautiful imagery Mohan - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan x
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Date: 6/24/2014 9:31:00 AM
- Bravo !!! - Perfect for this contest, Mohan :) - Very well done! - Good luck! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/24/2014 9:53:00 AM
Thanx Anne for dropping by and wishing me. Mohan
Date: 6/24/2014 2:51:00 AM
Very wonderful write, Mohan. I loved that last line...There must always be time for a quickie! ;) Thanks for your visit to my work and your sweet compliment.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/24/2014 9:13:00 AM
Thanks for coming and enjoying my write. Mohan
Date: 6/23/2014 8:49:00 PM
Very nice write ....good luck in the contest
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/24/2014 12:00:00 AM
Joseph, Thanks for your good wishes. Mohan
Date: 6/23/2014 3:07:00 PM
Very good take on bubbles, Mohan! Glad I stopped to read this one. gl in contest. // paul
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/23/2014 11:59:00 PM
Thanks Paul for your valued encouragement. Mohan
Date: 6/22/2014 7:24:00 AM
Hi Mohan, nice to know you. A brief but lovely flowing poem of ocean currents. Good Luck!
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/22/2014 7:39:00 AM
Thanx Ralph for your wishes. Mohan
Date: 6/22/2014 5:23:00 AM
Dear Mohan, I love the way you describe the bubbles capturing the sun. Indeed, they disappear like a "quickie." Great entry for the contest, my friend. Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/22/2014 7:40:00 AM
Thanks for your wishes Carolyn. Mohan
Date: 6/21/2014 8:47:00 PM
Terrific write Mohan : )
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/21/2014 9:41:00 PM
Thanks Cecilia for your visit and encouragement. Mohan
Date: 6/21/2014 5:30:00 PM
Oh I looked at that competition, and now reading this I'm glad I didn't enter. Nice write, all the best with the comp.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/21/2014 7:13:00 PM
Thanx Scott for visiting and for your best wishes. Mohan
Date: 6/21/2014 3:01:00 PM
what a smoothie for skat's challenge, mohan... i was charmed!. huggs
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/21/2014 7:15:00 PM
Thank you Nette. will be glad if Skat also falls for it. Mohan
Date: 6/20/2014 10:44:00 PM
this is a COOL Quickie. Way to do her contest.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/21/2014 1:12:00 AM
Hope so Andrea.
Date: 6/20/2014 7:10:00 AM
Perfectly descriptive! Well done:) Ihope to see this on the winners list Mohan :)
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/20/2014 7:12:00 AM
Thanks Casarah, for your wishes. Mohan
Date: 6/20/2014 6:05:00 AM
Very intelligently done!! Good luck.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/20/2014 7:13:00 AM
Thanks Vandana.

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