A Quickie

Ephemeral spheres, diaphanous, in mesmerizing dance parade from plastic wand air kissed by puckered pixie lips . . . giggles, wiggles, jiggles bubble display unzips. Faye Lanham Gibson Copyright, June 19, 2014

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2014 6:36:00 PM

this is short succinct and AWESOME. One of the cleverest entries I have seen on this topic.

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/19/2014 6:20:00 PM

unique and awesome Faye :) Good luck!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/19/2014 5:44:00 PM

Dear Faye, You did wonders with the image posted for this contest. Love the light-hearted way your "Bubble display unzips." As for me, I'm giggling. Best wishes in the contest, dear. Love, Carolyn

Faye Gibson
Date: 6/19/2014 6:03:00 PM

Carolyn, thank you. I think many of us are having fun with SKAT A's Quickie contest. Best wishes to you, my friend. Thanks for all your support.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/19/2014 4:22:00 PM

This is so cute..took me a minute to get the wand part, but it fits beautifully. BG