A Quickie

You ask me how happy I am?
Once I counted myself as satisfied,
I sat down at my island beach.
Friday's blown bubbles drifted past in a dream.
Who could be as happy with such a companion?

                            David Colquhoun. 
                             6-18-14.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 8:52 PM
this is lovely response to the contest theme of that picture. Congrats, David.
Allison Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 1:26 AM
beautifully penned I especially loved the final 2 lines - many congrats :-) Hugs jan
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