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A Quickie

Beneath every breath a flower lingers
Their sweet scent caught by vibrations
from the fragile wings of butterflies
As they float above the green meadow,
in colored disguise, for all to see



Fred Parker
6/18/14
contest.. A Quickie

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Andrea Dietrich

December 5, 2014 at 9:00 PM

Congrats for the win. first one I see on butterflies. Very pretty.

Jan Allison

December 2, 2014 at 1:42 AM

a beautiful take on the theme - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Frederic Parker

June 20, 2014 at 6:09 AM

Skat has pictures of bubbles to look at , then asks write what you feel, this is what I felt

Andrea Dietrich

June 20, 2014 at 12:12 AM

this is really nice with pretty imagery. I am seeing some of these quickie poems with bubble theme and some without. I think I am confused but I am going to go to that contest page and read it again. I think I am not going to get a poem finished in time before it fills up.

Frederic Parker

June 20, 2014 at 6:10 AM

read the reply above

Andrea Dietrich

June 20, 2014 at 12:10 AM

thanks so much for that sweet comment on my poem today. I do not really do that much for other people, just lots of poetry comments, it seems like. But I truly feel for the downtrodden. Let me see this poem of yours now.