Jesse Day Poet Verse

A Question of Futility

too many angels lost in a broken world futilely searching for their wings
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Written: 10/12/2016
Contest Entry: A Sad One Liner
Sponsor: Silent One
Results: 1st Place
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Connie Marcum Wong October 16, 2016 at 3:40 PM This is truly an impressive one-liner Jesse! Congratulations on your wonderful first place win! 7 ; )

Alexis Y. October 13, 2016 at 6:35 PM Hi Jesse, This is so sad. Congratulations on your 1st place win: -) Alexis

Paloma P October 13, 2016 at 2:23 PM Goes right to the heart, so sad.

Beautiful Scars October 13, 2016 at 11:36 AM so sad Jesse...congrats on your placement :)-luloo Jesse Day October 14, 2016 at 8:24 AM Thank you, Laura

Anna-Marie Docherty October 12, 2016 at 12:51 PM So sad but yet so true. Beautifully captured, congratulations on your deserved win. Jesse Day October 14, 2016 at 8:24 AM Thank you, Anna-Marie

Augustus Black October 12, 2016 at 12:19 PM Ah,, wow... This is truely beyond imagination. What a great line. Congratulation for placement. Jesse Day October 14, 2016 at 8:23 AM Than you for your comments

Anne-Lise Andresen October 12, 2016 at 10:59 AM - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Jesse - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jesse Day October 14, 2016 at 8:22 AM Thank you!

Charlie Smith October 12, 2016 at 10:10 AM Well done and congratulations Jesse... Jesse Day October 14, 2016 at 8:22 AM Thank you, Charlie