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A Question of Futility

too many angels lost in a broken world futilely searching for their wings ............ Written: 10/12/2016 Contest Entry: A Sad One Liner Sponsor: Silent One Results: 1st Place .............

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/16/2016 3:40:00 PM

This is truly an impressive one-liner Jesse! Congratulations on your wonderful first place win! 7 ; )

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/13/2016 6:35:00 PM

Hi Jesse, This is so sad. Congratulations on your 1st place win: -) Alexis

Paloma P

Date: 10/13/2016 2:23:00 PM

Goes right to the heart, so sad.

Lu Loo

Date: 10/13/2016 11:36:00 AM

so sad Jesse...congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Jesse Day
Date: 10/14/2016 8:24:00 AM

Thank you, Laura

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 10/12/2016 12:51:00 PM

So sad but yet so true. Beautifully captured, congratulations on your deserved win.

Jesse Day
Date: 10/14/2016 8:24:00 AM

Thank you, Anna-Marie

Augustus Black

Date: 10/12/2016 12:19:00 PM

Ah,, wow... This is truely beyond imagination. What a great line. Congratulation for placement.

Jesse Day
Date: 10/14/2016 8:23:00 AM

Than you for your comments

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2016 10:59:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Jesse - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jesse Day
Date: 10/14/2016 8:22:00 AM

Thank you!

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/12/2016 10:10:00 AM

Well done and congratulations Jesse...

Jesse Day
Date: 10/14/2016 8:22:00 AM

Thank you, Charlie