Kash Poet Poet Tail-rhyme

A Puzzled Butterfly

A butterfly with rainbow touch
fluttering wings delicate much,
there in my garden.

All the flowers asking to sit
spreading fragrance seducing it,
whom to entertain?





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Carol Sunshine Brown December 7, 2012 at 10:56 AM Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Kash. Love Carol

Vicky Tsiluma December 4, 2012 at 11:42 PM Beautiful write Kash! Congrats on your win!

Joyce Johnson December 4, 2012 at 11:33 PM Really nice Kash. Poor butterfly. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A December 4, 2012 at 4:56 PM Kash,, a nice little win... good poem..PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 4, 2012 at 1:25 PM Another stunner Kash , Congratulations on your win xx

Jon A Cavanaugh December 4, 2012 at 10:53 AM Love your first place win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 4, 2012 at 9:05 AM congrats Kash on a fabulous first place win luv .. awesome creation .. luv sharing with u too..

Joseph May December 4, 2012 at 9:01 AM congrats on your win Kash

S.Jagathsimhan Nair December 4, 2012 at 8:47 AM Congratulations, Kash. It was so sweet!! Jag

Victoria Anderson-Throop December 4, 2012 at 8:18 AM delicate and lovely-- image on the bottom of the page a nice touch

Richard Lamoureux December 4, 2012 at 7:37 AM Congratulations on 1st placement.

Gwendolen Song December 4, 2012 at 7:30 AM Amazing scene and dialogue in this winning tail rhyme, Kash...a hearty congrats!! gwendolen

Bukang Liwayway December 4, 2012 at 7:18 AM me first lol! excellent write. I like it :) Big Congratulations on your grand win friend Kash. cheers!! hugsss, Maria

Terry L. Allen May 17, 2012 at 12:53 PM This put me in mind of you with all the attention you get here from all the ladies. Great poem Kash. Huggs TLee

Margaret Foster November 24, 2011 at 6:30 PM I picture the flowers turning their faces, vying for attention. I enjoyed this beauty. Congratulations Kash...Margaret

Carol Sunshine Brown November 23, 2011 at 12:45 PM Congratulations on your win in this contest today Kash. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley November 23, 2011 at 9:26 AM Congratulations on your HM Kash

Charles Henderson August 12, 2011 at 12:23 AM this is so simple, and so very, very good. I enjoyed tremendously. Just goes to show what a short poem can do, if done right. I know it will do well in the contest.

Judy Ball August 11, 2011 at 10:03 PM This is very cleverly done and shows much thought. Great job. God Bless, JB

Gwendolen Song August 9, 2011 at 2:04 PM Whom to entertain! Wow, this is great stuff! Congrats on this most special poem about my favorite insect of all. Great scene and very dramatic! Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown August 8, 2011 at 4:27 PM Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tail Rhyme" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels August 8, 2011 at 6:36 AM This is cute write Kash and I see you won in the contest as well.. Congratulations to you :)

Sara Kendrick August 7, 2011 at 6:59 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Don Johnson August 7, 2011 at 6:41 PM thoughts n flow n woebetow, chuckles are the thing, a catching nought as on i go, me sprang has sprung from spring. y/no:) well done here mate, Don

Black Eyed Susan August 7, 2011 at 5:22 PM What a creative idea! i love the idea of flowers seducing the butterfly. congratulations on your win!

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