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A Puzzled Butterfly

A butterfly with rainbow touch fluttering wings delicate much, there in my garden. All the flowers asking to sit spreading fragrance seducing it, whom to entertain? ================000================

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2012 10:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Kash. Love Carol

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 12/4/2012 11:42:00 PM

Beautiful write Kash! Congrats on your win!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/4/2012 11:33:00 PM

Really nice Kash. Poor butterfly. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/4/2012 4:56:00 PM

Kash,, a nice little win... good poem..PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/4/2012 1:25:00 PM

Another stunner Kash , Congratulations on your win xx

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 12/4/2012 10:53:00 AM

Love your first place win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/4/2012 9:05:00 AM

congrats Kash on a fabulous first place win luv .. awesome creation .. luv sharing with u too..

Joseph May

Date: 12/4/2012 9:01:00 AM

congrats on your win Kash

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 12/4/2012 8:47:00 AM

Congratulations, Kash. It was so sweet!! Jag

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 12/4/2012 8:18:00 AM

delicate and lovely-- image on the bottom of the page a nice touch

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/4/2012 7:37:00 AM

Congratulations on 1st placement.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/4/2012 7:30:00 AM

Amazing scene and dialogue in this winning tail rhyme, Kash...a hearty congrats!! gwendolen

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 12/4/2012 7:18:00 AM

me first lol! excellent write. I like it :) Big Congratulations on your grand win friend Kash. cheers!! hugsss, Maria

Terry L. Allen

Date: 5/17/2012 12:53:00 PM

This put me in mind of you with all the attention you get here from all the ladies. Great poem Kash. Huggs TLee

Margaret Foster

Date: 11/24/2011 6:30:00 PM

I picture the flowers turning their faces, vying for attention. I enjoyed this beauty. Congratulations Kash...Margaret

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/23/2011 12:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in this contest today Kash. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/23/2011 9:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your HM Kash

Charles Henderson

Date: 8/12/2011 12:23:00 AM

this is so simple, and so very, very good. I enjoyed tremendously. Just goes to show what a short poem can do, if done right. I know it will do well in the contest.

Judy Ball

Date: 8/11/2011 10:03:00 PM

This is very cleverly done and shows much thought. Great job. God Bless, JB

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/9/2011 2:04:00 PM

Whom to entertain! Wow, this is great stuff! Congrats on this most special poem about my favorite insect of all. Great scene and very dramatic! Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/8/2011 4:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tail Rhyme" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/8/2011 6:36:00 AM

This is cute write Kash and I see you won in the contest as well.. Congratulations to you :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2011 6:59:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Don Johnson

Date: 8/7/2011 6:41:00 PM

thoughts n flow n woebetow, chuckles are the thing, a catching nought as on i go, me sprang has sprung from spring. y/no:) well done here mate, Don

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 8/7/2011 5:22:00 PM

What a creative idea! i love the idea of flowers seducing the butterfly. congratulations on your win!