A Purpose

Life took me for a ride
                 up
It took me 
It took me 
                down
It spun me round and round
like a spinning top () ()
unknowing where it will stop
out of control one minute
then  in control the next
changes and more changes
arranging and rearranging
Building and taking apart
in the journey called life
brought to a place 
to fulfill a purpose.

28/06/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 2:31 PM
I agree...life is sure like this Phyl. I hope you are mending well after your surgery? I can relate to slowing down. If I walk too fast, my knees have me on crutches. It is the hardest thing for me to deal with...slowing down. Cheers, Connie : )
Babcock Avatar
July 10, 2017 at 10:08 AM
Thanks Connie. Yes I have a bad knee so know if you overuse it and how you suffer. I am mending slowly. Picked up an infection so set me back a bit. All is all hoping by 8 weeks will be back to myself. love phyl
Horne Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 2:51 PM
loved this, Phyll - hope you're feeling much better now & that the get well card has reached you by now (I know snail mail really does seem to be delivered by snails at times) x
Babcock Avatar
July 10, 2017 at 10:05 AM
Thanks for the card Jack. Yes mail can be slow. I am getting better and improving daily. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 4:16 AM
- All "machines" need to be repaired from time to time, Phyllis - The wheels must go round - Patience ... is the keyword - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
July 10, 2017 at 10:04 AM
Hi Anne Lise. Yes patience is what you need. Not being able to bend over yet is hard thank goodness for flip flops and that it is summer. love phyl
Turner Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 4:39 PM
At least that's what we've been told, everything happens for a purpose. Hoping you are feeling better, Mrs Phyllis:)
Babcock Avatar
July 10, 2017 at 10:02 AM
Thanks starting to feel better. love phyl
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