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A Purpose

Life took me for a ride
                 up
It took me 
It took me 
                down
It spun me round and round
like a spinning top () ()
unknowing where it will stop
out of control one minute
then  in control the next
changes and more changes
arranging and rearranging
Building and taking apart
in the journey called life
brought to a place 
to fulfill a purpose.

28/06/17

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/6/2017 2:31:00 PM

I agree...life is sure like this Phyl. I hope you are mending well after your surgery? I can relate to slowing down. If I walk too fast, my knees have me on crutches. It is the hardest thing for me to deal with...slowing down. Cheers, Connie : )

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/10/2017 10:08:00 AM

Thanks Connie. Yes I have a bad knee so know if you overuse it and how you suffer. I am mending slowly. Picked up an infection so set me back a bit. All is all hoping by 8 weeks will be back to myself. love phyl

Jack Horne

Date: 7/1/2017 2:51:00 PM

loved this, Phyll - hope you're feeling much better now & that the get well card has reached you by now (I know snail mail really does seem to be delivered by snails at times) x

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/10/2017 10:05:00 AM

Thanks for the card Jack. Yes mail can be slow. I am getting better and improving daily. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/29/2017 4:16:00 AM

- All "machines" need to be repaired from time to time, Phyllis - The wheels must go round - Patience ... is the keyword - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/10/2017 10:04:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise. Yes patience is what you need. Not being able to bend over yet is hard thank goodness for flip flops and that it is summer. love phyl