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A Puppet On Your Strings

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Just a fun write!

Puppet on your strings

You own me...
own my body and soul.
You play me...
you've taken complete control.

You can do anything 
that you want ...with me
You play me... (I'm like)
a puppet on your strings

Watch me now!
You can make me, do anything
I'm willing...
'Cause I'm your puppet ...yeah
I'm a puppet on your strings

I'll be your...
tiny dancer
I'll be your...
soul romancer
I'll be your...
2nd chancer
I'll be your...
final answer

Pull me this way
Pull me that way
Pull me over
Pull me closer

I'll do anything for you
baby,
'cause I'm your puppet
I'm a puppet on your strings
So come on over now...
and play me...
pull those strings...
and I'll dance for you.

John Derek Hamilton
March 04, 2017

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John Michaels

Date: 4/22/2017 3:17:00 AM

I loved the bouncy, jaunty rhythm of this piece, John, whilst conveying that depth of emotion. Nice write. Regards, John.

John Hamilton
Date: 4/22/2017 1:22:00 PM

Thanks again John

Terry O'Leary

Date: 3/26/2017 5:26:00 PM

Pleasant, light poetry... but sometime the strings can become chains... ;-) A fine write! (Great rhyming!!) Terry

John Hamilton
Date: 3/26/2017 8:28:00 PM

Thanks Terry, was just a fun write, but thanks for the visit and comments I do appreciate it.

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/10/2017 4:27:00 AM

A delightful piece John :-) How refreshing to read positive thoughts for "puppet on a string'. Upbeat with a lyrical feel this is wonderful writing, a pleasure to read.:-) many blessings to you :-) lynn

John Hamilton
Date: 3/10/2017 8:00:00 AM

Thank you Lynn for your positive comments on my poem, I appreciate it, especially coming from you, such a talented writer.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/6/2017 11:16:00 AM

I love this, John 7 When we can trust the one that loves us, we can trust the pulling of strings. Love the movement in your poem! I can see and feel the whole orchestration! Saving this beauty!

John Hamilton
Date: 3/6/2017 1:01:00 PM

Wow thanks Kim, glad you liked it.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/6/2017 10:17:00 AM

A tasty light poem which could easily be reconstructed and used as lyrics for a song, John. Truly enjoyed. Regards // paul

John Hamilton
Date: 3/6/2017 11:03:00 AM

Hi Paul, you're right, I was thinking of that, but another verse was lacking so I posted it as is, let's see what comes to me, I'm sure this will be a song. Didn't some motown artist do I'm your puppet in the 60's I forget who. Thanks for the visit!

James Inman

Date: 3/5/2017 11:44:00 AM

I like it John. Cool lyrics.

John Hamilton
Date: 3/5/2017 1:12:00 PM

Thanks James always a pleasure to hear from you!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 3/5/2017 9:03:00 AM

I love and very much enjoy your lite romantic take on this theme! A7 for an excellent write! When you have some time please check out a piece I penned called "I'm Not Your Puppet" (12-26-2014) which is a different take on the theme by one whose love was taken for granted. :-) Best wishes. Pandita

John Hamilton
Date: 3/5/2017 1:11:00 PM

I did read your puppet poem and it is outstanding, I saw it but maybe forgot to comment, thanks for the visit, Pandita, hope you're having a good day!