A Punishment

What do you call a place
that gives the respite your
soul needs?
But this home moves and 
disappears,
And it’s grounds forbid your 
entrance;
What do you call bed
that holds you like how a child
assumes the comfort a cloud 
can give?
But this bed has hiding springs
and a tattered duvet;
What do you call a garden
that has a promising 
cornucopia,
you had planted every flower
every fruit and herb with your 
own hand.
But then worms expressed 
interest,
your nurturing proved only 
attractive;
What do you call a place
that holds your heart?
Comfortable
and caged;
The windows are shattered
and the garden is choked with 
weeds;
Watch your heart shrivel,
I love you too.

S.M. Alexis
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 8:20 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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January 19, 2016 at 12:43 PM
SHENNA, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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