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A Punishment

What do you call a place that gives the respite your soul needs? But this home moves and disappears, And it’s grounds forbid your entrance; What do you call bed that holds you like how a child assumes the comfort a cloud can give? But this bed has hiding springs and a tattered duvet; What do you call a garden that has a promising cornucopia, you had planted every flower every fruit and herb with your own hand. But then worms expressed interest, your nurturing proved only attractive; What do you call a place that holds your heart? Comfortable and caged; The windows are shattered and the garden is choked with weeds; Watch your heart shrivel, I love you too. S.M. Alexis

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/14/2025 8:20:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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Date: 1/19/2016 12:43:00 PM
SHENNA, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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