A Punch Up

All this talk of brothers and sisters! It’s been a punch up from the beginning! What religion are you - Oh! Another punch up! Where do you come from – Oh! Another punch up! How much money is in your pocket - Oh! A punch up from the beginning till the end of time!

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/29/2010 3:06:00 PM

So what do you believe?? just kidding! do you have money in your pocket? I don't have a jingle... you are ok no matter the status.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/23/2010 1:17:00 PM

No Nigel ..not directly speaking to God but on Soup there are jealous "haters" and its been on again off again and I wanted to let them know I luv everyone regardless.. I am a luv person..that is why I am dubbed the "Sweetheart" by P.S. poets.. a few meaningless poets always enjoy making trouble or creating controversy.. am no "holy roller" but do have strong faith in a Supreme Being... your poem is so apropos right now..luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2010 1:38:00 PM

nice one, enjoyed your write...P.D.