A Psalm of Resolve

Psalm 61
          Hear my cry, O God;
         attend unto my prayer. 
 From the end of the earth will I cry unto thee,
    when my heart is overwhelmed. 
    Lead me to the rock that is higher than I; 
                     ......

Merciful God trusting in your love and grace
Broken and contrite I am fallen on my face
The world is all upside down, and I'm bereft
Of father, mother, friend; vanites have left
Me nothing I can hold, and sometimes alone
I wonder amidst the raging storms of grief
What else shall I do, I have done all to atone
And yet your justice despise my soul's relief.
It seemed I am pulled down when I need be
Up, battered and wretched, tempted to flee.
O God who is my all, my tower and my hope
My feet falters in dark valleys, and yet I grope
Preferring your chastisment to life's applause
I stand committed to the promise of they laws
No where else to go, but higher still I climb
To find the Rock of all faith, and peace sublime.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Peranteau Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 11:40 AM
L'nass,..keep singing your beautiful "Psalms",..praise Jehovah and ask all things in Jesus name His Son,..and your tribulations will have reward !!! How powerful you make me feel L'nass in my faith,..I thank you ! Bravo james
Orozco Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 8:43 AM
"Father I praise you my king".......this is an incredible write! I too ask to be lead to the rock higher than I awesome poem L'nass God bless- jeremia
Joseph Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 1:15 PM
just when I needed a little encouragement to lift my head today..."lead me to the rock that is higher than I.."...Bless you!
Joe Avatar
May 11, 2009 at 6:28 AM
I am not a believer but Ivalue the bible all the same. For me the Psalms stand out as some of the greatest devotional poetry written. psalm 61 is an example. I think that you have done something here that not many writers would be capable of doing; and that is composing a psalm that has move than just relevance as a guide but also is a beautiful poem. that you have chosen to use a rhyme structure, whilst maintaining the overall impact, is a sign of real poetry.
Chircop Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 8:40 AM
i love psalms more than anything in the bible,they flow like poetry,aand this poem flows like the psalms--amen---charma
Christian Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 7:09 AM
a beautiful write, Psalms is my fave book in the bible, this is so awesome Godbless you from diane
Reynolds Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 3:45 AM
Wow, the psalm and the following prayer is...well, I am speechless. beauty abounds here, and light pervades all who read. God bless you always, my friend, love and light and wholeness always, Kristin
Strand Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 12:20 AM
Very prayerful writing L'nass.Rgds Brian
Devonshire Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 3:43 PM
A beautiful commentary on Psalm 61! We are well advised to remember that "the rock..is higher than I." Great work! Love, Carolyn
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