John Loving Iii Poet I do not know?

A Proposal of Sorts

marry me
because i'd like to wake up
in OUR bed
i'd like to go to OUR church
in OUR car
i'd like to celebrate with OUR
children all the special days
of the year
and i'd like to have OUR aniversary
here i am with everything i own
that i would like to be OURS
in a house, in a heart
in a hopefull future
but the only thing missing
is a past and words like
we, us and them 
i don't want to suffice with 
just being him

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Phyllis Babcock April 5, 2012 at 12:32 PM YES, it is hard to be alone so the word -our-makes life complete. love phyl

Elizabeth Wesley March 31, 2012 at 4:34 PM Yes, I'm here and still love to read this and you have a soup mail.

Harry Horsman March 24, 2012 at 9:20 AM this is different, John, and enjoyable to read. harry

Caroline Cécile Delacroix March 24, 2012 at 12:25 AM Nicely written, I hope your dream comes true! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem. Caroline.

Daver Austin March 22, 2012 at 3:15 PM Very inventive stuff, John. How could a prospective mate resist this proposal, which covers yesterday, today and tomorrow in such a charming way. Love, daver

Poet Destroyer A March 18, 2012 at 8:45 PM John, nice,,, to want and have someone always..God Bless,,.. have yourself a good night~ always*PD

Leonard Taormina March 18, 2012 at 6:42 PM The resonance of this write is quite vivid. Enjoyed your poem poet

Elizabeth Wesley March 18, 2012 at 2:58 PM I feel your longing John; sometimes patience isn't enough, the need is now and when it isn't forthcoming, there is pain. Love yourself in the meantime as you are special! :)

Jessica K March 18, 2012 at 7:06 AM Super cute!! A wonderful write, John