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A Promise Till Eternity

He sits in his cozy reclining chair, In poor health, tired, and feeling very old. The effect of times emotional toll And what inner self aging brings to bear. I scroll back the echoes of this striking Man, several years back. When we were young, He stole my heart; me, a wild-bloom among So many, he picked me to his liking. He asked, "Be mine, my love for eternity?" I couldn't refuse his blue eyes full of love. A promise amidst the bright stars above. I'd melt in his embrace till infinity. Although the gentle man we knew is gone, He still dances with me with a new dawn. 4/24/2020

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Date: 4/24/2020 11:35:00 PM
A marvelous sonnet, Eve, and so romantic! I enjoyed every line. :)
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Date: 4/24/2020 3:49:00 PM
Such a beautiful piece Eve. Very few experience true love. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 4/24/2020 1:56:00 PM
Mesmerizing sonnet, Eve!:-) Congratulations!
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Date: 4/24/2020 12:35:00 PM
Touching sentiment, if there ever was one. Feel blessed for that time spent. Actually, few ever experience it. At least, you can hold that time in memory. And write about it passionately...for the rest of us. Congratulations Eve.
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Date: 4/24/2020 12:27:00 PM
A great win and poem. Enjoy your day and your win. Hugs.........
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