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5/24/2026 for Language of Love Poetry Contest sponsored by Ink Empress

A Promise of Forever

A marriage bond is to keep, not sever, 
and yet, I made that sacred promise - twice.
We pledged that we would not part, not ever.
Those words, like lovely music, sounded nice. 

Of those unions, just memories survive,
some good, some bad, and some which I hold dear; 
and those couplings which fate once did contrive
would slowly and painfully disappear.

In a myth, Charon forever ferried
souls, as always, one special love, now gone
and ghosts of each woman that I married
will ever bitter-sweetly linger on.   

A memory, and nothing more - or less, 
honors a promise of foreverness.
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June 2, 2026 at 3:44 AM
Such an honest and heart touching write, this is dear David! I especially loved “ ghosts of each woman that I married will ever bitter-sweetly linger on” some things and faces remain as memories and ghosts… always. Youv expressed so well here. Thank you for sharing this. Pleasure reading and placing this as a winner. Congratulations. Sending you light
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June 4, 2026 at 9:30 PM
Thanks, Ink Empress! I enjoyed the contest, though it did involve dredging up a few ghosts - lol!
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