A Promise

Holding your hand wont make you stay. 
How many times d o I have to watch you walk away 
Before I can hold you close to me?
What will become of our love that all watch and none see?
In your eyes I find the truth
We are united forever by our hearts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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December 20, 2011 at 8:37 AM
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Savannah. Love and blessings, Carol
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July 21, 2009 at 6:12 AM
Savannah, your poems I see here from years long past. But......where are you and your new poetry? Please come back and write. Love, Carol
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