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A Promise

He once sat in his cozy chair, A young man at that time. He would share combat stories, His love of fishing, hunting, And camping outings With family and friends he cared. A half-century later, Age and illness decided to reside Within him in that cozy chair. He would look at me with loving eyes, Reminisce of the days he stole my heart. An evening a long time ago, Under the undiluted deepening Orange blaze of a new night sky. Romantically he bent the knee Made a promise to me Amid darken shadows and stars above. His illness won as he faded Into the shadows of the night. I still melt in his embrace With just a glint sight As he still sits In his cozy chair a young man. 6/1/2020

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Date: 6/6/2020 7:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Eve! You have expressed your heartfelt feelings and loving memories in such a beautiful way! This poem is written with love and has touched me immensely.
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Date: 6/6/2020 1:24:00 PM
Such heartfelt memories blended with your soulful emotions Eve. Blessings. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/6/2020 7:41:00 AM
a sad but beautiful poem... Beautiful tribute to Roper...Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 6/5/2020 11:10:00 AM
I sobbed with this poem Eve - the love the two of you shared was unique, I can feel it in your words, the very essence of your poem speaks volumes about the love you had for each other. Kudos my friend, he loves you so much and is so proud of you. Blessigs and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/2/2020 10:38:00 PM
Beautiful., Eve! You have pulled at my heart strings with your loving memories. I believe I'll see this high on the winner's list! God bless, :) Rhonda
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