A Privileged Soak

Take courage, child, when the storm speaks,
A privileged soak that wakes you up,
For God dispels the mountain peaks.
Take courage, child, when the storm speaks.
Ancient of Days, of whirlwind streaks, 
Takes off your blinder shades, shakes up.
Take courage, child, when the storm speaks.
A privileged soak that wakes you up.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Buehler Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 10:40 PM
Wit and charm grace these lines abundantly, Kim. Thank you for sharing. :)
Greenhough Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 6:25 PM
I have been caught in similar storms, the worst was when on vacation in Mexico.i like your theme and the triolet style.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 12:59 PM
Thank you, Hilda!
Hind Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 9:42 AM
Interesting, loved the rhyming...a great triolet. <3
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 10:07 AM
Thank you, Paige! :)
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