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A Privileged Soak

Take courage, child, when the storm speaks, A privileged soak that wakes you up, For God dispels the mountain peaks. Take courage, child, when the storm speaks. Ancient of Days, of whirlwind streaks, Takes off your blinder shades, shakes up. Take courage, child, when the storm speaks. A privileged soak that wakes you up.

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Date: 10/12/2024 10:40:00 PM
Wit and charm grace these lines abundantly, Kim. Thank you for sharing. :)
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Date: 10/11/2024 6:25:00 PM
I have been caught in similar storms, the worst was when on vacation in Mexico.i like your theme and the triolet style.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2024 12:59:00 PM
Thank you, Hilda!
Date: 10/11/2024 9:42:00 AM
Interesting, loved the rhyming...a great triolet. <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2024 10:07:00 AM
Thank you, Paige! :)

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