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A Principessa Waits: Constanza

She floats among palazzo halls
in teal brocade of lambent silk
procured for ladies of her ilk

while sepia of gloaming falls.
Candescence rises in her skin; 
awakened is her heart within

to hear her lover's twilit calls.
She twirls and plucks a biding rose:
He Loves Me, comes the whispered prose.

The timbre of his voice enthralls,
the tickling whim of evening breeze
that waltzes through her mind's reprise.

As deeper into love she falls
the halos 'round the candles rise
to beg the lucence of his eyes.


She floats among palazzo halls
when sepia of gloaming falls
to hear her lover's twilit calls.
The timbre of his voice enthralls
as deeper into love she falls.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barden Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 10:03 AM
Oh, this is so chock-full of meaty words and phrasing, and wonderfully composed, with substantive and thoughtful intent - like a woven tapestry! My first Constanza was for Connie's contest, and it was SO much fun ... I need to do more, just for learning and joy's sake. LOVE this, my friend! :-)
Cozart Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 10:08 AM
Thank, Greg. Constanza is indeed a fun form to write in!
One Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 10:26 AM
Great use of vocabulary... great choice for this form of poetry..
Cozart Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 10:34 AM
Thank you.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 12:20 PM
Wow Dale, you have certainly mastered my Constanza form! You write it much better than me. Should anyone ask me about my form, I would direct them to read your Constanza's. This piece is simply exquisite! I love it and am saving it into my Faves! Bravo! Thank you! : )
Cozart Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 12:33 PM
Thanks so much, Connie! I wrote the two for Constanza contests on AP. Apparently your form is gaining in popularity!
Ashley Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 9:51 PM
The beauty of your poem 'enthralls' me Dale. Exquisite and elegant.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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January 1, 2018 at 8:09 AM
Thanks, Susan!
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December 31, 2017 at 6:20 PM
My favorite line: the halos 'round the candles rise. Very nicely done, Dale!
Cozart Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 6:53 PM
Thanks so much, Kim!
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