A Pride of Sleepy Stones

Treeline, stretch to dusk!
Stones sleep ‘neath your canopy
In the sun’s brief smile
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Nieves Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 8:24 AM
CONGRATS! on your win. Nice lytrics.
George   Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 1:55 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest, Michael. Love, Lainie
Augustus Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 4:59 PM
I like your use of personification as you describe parts of nature as living and breathing as we are. It's nice. I really like your final line! Congratulations on placing in Raul's contest!
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October 1, 2009 at 12:31 PM
Nice use of personification for an interesting view. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
Brown Avatar
October 1, 2009 at 4:15 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Michael. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 11:56 PM
Michael, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
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