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A Pride of Sleepy Stones

Treeline, stretch to dusk! Stones sleep ‘neath your canopy In the sun’s brief smile

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/14/2009 8:24:00 AM
CONGRATS! on your win. Nice lytrics.
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Date: 10/8/2009 1:55:00 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest, Michael. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/4/2009 4:59:00 PM
I like your use of personification as you describe parts of nature as living and breathing as we are. It's nice. I really like your final line! Congratulations on placing in Raul's contest!
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Date: 10/1/2009 12:31:00 PM
Nice use of personification for an interesting view. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 10/1/2009 4:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2009 11:56:00 PM
Michael, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
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