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A Pretty Spring

Found in the rain forest a pretty spring, With two contrast, flowing from same source, Mystery! No one can direct its course, Praises to nature as wind and birds sing, Hot and cold aqua flowing from same stone, Tourists move to sight this nature's best, As the heat from one part wade off weed pest, Insects dance and send out melodious tone, Gathering of the beast and weak is fun, As the crickets and fireflies announce it, Eyes came to see as passion has a sit , It's crystal clear and brighter than the sun . 8-15-2019 **it's about the hot and cold spring in Nigeria (at Ikogosi in Ondo state)-one of the tourist attraction in Nigeria where you have a spring that is one part cold and one part warm ,flowing side by side from the same source. Contest:writing challenge 2,August 2019 enclosed rhyme sponsored by Dear Heart .

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Date: 8/23/2019 3:22:00 PM
This is amazing Olusegun! I would love to see the beauty there. You have captured this mystery beautifully my friend. I loved this poem! Congratulations on your win I would have place much higher! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/23/2019 12:17:00 PM
Olusegun, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your Enclosed Rhyme. Your poem is lovely !
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Date: 8/22/2019 11:35:00 PM
Congratulations Olusegun. Hugs Eve
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