A Pretty Red Rose

My lover sent me a pretty red rose,
Knowing it is my favorite bloom. 
He is the most considerate of beaus.

I held it with its fragrance to my nose.
The lovely scent seemed to fill up the room.
My lover sent me a pretty red rose.

A slow sniff tingled me from head to toes.
Petals are perfect, there's no need to groom.
He is the most considerate of beaus.

I love the gorgeous flower that he chose.
It truly makes my lovesick heart go boom.
My lover sent me a pretty red rose.

I dream of him and rose when my eyes close.
My rose will comfort me when troubles loom
He is the most considerate of beaus.

I pinned it to the collar of my clothes,
The rose so red it penetrates the gloom.
My lover sent me a pretty red rose.
He is the most considerate of beaus.

Written 6/18/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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De Beaulieu Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 11:33 AM
Hello Joyce, Red roses are my favourite flower to. Then it is the lavender. I have red paper roses. Better than not having red roses at all.Enjoy your day my friend.
Bangalee Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 6:11 AM
beautiful poem penned
Canerdy Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 9:22 PM
A 7 for this lovely WINNING poem, Joyce! Janice
Scars Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 7:10 PM
Joyce, congrats on your placement with this wonderful poem :)-luloo
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 10:54 AM
I like this villanelle. Beautiful write. Congrats on your win :) Sunita
Lamoureux Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Congrats on your win in my contest.
A  Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 12:58 AM
Very nice to read Joyce. SKAT
Kendrick Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 4:38 PM
Great work ..These are not so easy to write but you made it seamless..Congrats..Sara
Horne Avatar
July 2, 2016 at 5:36 PM
this is just beautiful, Joyce. Hope you are feeling well & still enjoying your garden. Here, it's mostly rain (but I like rain!) Have a lovely weekend xx
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