A Pretty Red Rose

My lover sent me a pretty red rose,
Knowing it is my favorite bloom. 
He is the most considerate of beaus.

I held it with its fragrance to my nose.
The lovely scent seemed to fill up the room.
My lover sent me a pretty red rose.

A slow sniff tingled me from head to toes.
Petals are perfect, there's no need to groom.
He is the most considerate of beaus.

I love the gorgeous flower that he chose.
It truly makes my lovesick heart go boom.
My lover sent me a pretty red rose.

I dream of him and rose when my eyes close.
My rose will comfort me when troubles loom
He is the most considerate of beaus.

I pinned it to the collar of my clothes,
The rose so red it penetrates the gloom.
My lover sent me a pretty red rose.
He is the most considerate of beaus.

Written 6/18/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/1/2023 11:33:00 AM
Hello Joyce, Red roses are my favourite flower to. Then it is the lavender. I have red paper roses. Better than not having red roses at all.Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 6/30/2019 6:11:00 AM
beautiful poem penned
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Date: 8/7/2016 9:22:00 PM
A 7 for this lovely WINNING poem, Joyce! Janice
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Date: 8/7/2016 7:10:00 PM
Joyce, congrats on your placement with this wonderful poem :)-luloo
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Date: 8/7/2016 10:54:00 AM
I like this villanelle. Beautiful write. Congrats on your win :) Sunita
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Date: 8/6/2016 9:51:00 AM
Congrats on your win in my contest.
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Date: 7/9/2016 12:58:00 AM
Very nice to read Joyce. SKAT
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Date: 7/6/2016 4:38:00 PM
Great work ..These are not so easy to write but you made it seamless..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 7/2/2016 5:36:00 PM
this is just beautiful, Joyce. Hope you are feeling well & still enjoying your garden. Here, it's mostly rain (but I like rain!) Have a lovely weekend xx
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