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A Prelude

Shy is the February sun Above the frazzled fatherland However hearts are not undone Giving instead a warmer brand Holding one closer under the sun.
A prelude to Valentine's day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 2/13/2012 9:01:00 PM
This truly beautiful of love at any cost.: ) Thank you for your kind remarks to my work , Brenda : )
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Date: 2/13/2012 4:11:00 PM
Ah. but the mountain sun - at altitude - will scorch your Valentine. LOve this piece and its warm implication. Love, daver
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Date: 2/13/2012 9:35:00 AM
lovely words to preclude the day of luv on this Planet Caroline.. ,may you enjoy a happy day for Valentine luv..
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Date: 2/13/2012 7:12:00 AM
Sweet Caroline,well done.Happy Valentines Day to you, do something romantick to day Caroline. - oxox love from Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/12/2012 6:57:00 PM
okay, this is completely wow. frazzled fatherland, really?? brilliant!! i am so lucky today for finding some new favorite poets and one of them is so you. enjoyed this.
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