A Prelude

Shy is the February sun Above the frazzled fatherland However hearts are not undone Giving instead a warmer brand Holding one closer under the sun.
A prelude to Valentine's day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Northeast Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 9:01 PM
This truly beautiful of love at any cost.: ) Thank you for your kind remarks to my work , Brenda : )
Austin Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 4:11 PM
Ah. but the mountain sun - at altitude - will scorch your Valentine. LOve this piece and its warm implication. Love, daver
Sweetheart Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 9:35 AM
lovely words to preclude the day of luv on this Planet Caroline.. ,may you enjoy a happy day for Valentine luv..
Andresen Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 7:12 AM
Sweet Caroline,well done.Happy Valentines Day to you, do something romantick to day Caroline. - oxox love from Anne-Lise
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February 12, 2012 at 6:57 PM
okay, this is completely wow. frazzled fatherland, really?? brilliant!! i am so lucky today for finding some new favorite poets and one of them is so you. enjoyed this.
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