A Preamble

You met a man who said to you,
"You are the most beautiful woman
He has ever met”.
You *whispered into my ears,
"You felt sensations into your breasts",

I met an *eloquent well dressed woman 
Walking with *splendor in *lavender color
In *lilting stride giving a feeling of *tranquility
*Wafting in *fragrant Bocheron perfume
Who said to me,
"She loves my skin the most",
She uttered  in such* dulcet & harmonious breath
I had the same sensations as you .

Is it humour in emotional chaos
To be remembered in tranquility?
Were they the pointers- a preamble?
For us to be driven together in *bliss?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Strand Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 8:34 AM
Best wishes in the contest Ram.Rgds Brian & than you for your welcome comments.
Bayer Avatar
April 13, 2010 at 8:50 PM
To quote Ezra Pound, this is "verse not interesting enough as verse to warrant so much of it". That being said, the last four lines are brilliant. I didn't think James Thurber could have spoken about humor more eloquently, but you have managed to improve upon excellence. Take your final stanza and start anew.
Byrne Avatar
April 13, 2010 at 7:30 PM
ahem........steamy stuff but good!
Murphy Avatar
April 13, 2010 at 3:13 PM
very nice write good luck in the contest and thank you for all your kind comments faleshia
Austin Avatar
April 13, 2010 at 2:41 PM
"Is it humour in emotional chaos to be remembered in tranquility? This is a puzzling question, Dr. One agrees with the other only through detachment. Few have that power. I will think long and hard on this poem. Love, daver
Haick Avatar
April 13, 2010 at 1:01 PM
I should say so!! This is a delightful write, Dr. Ram...It's a winner in my book! Peace, audrey
Richards Avatar
April 13, 2010 at 7:13 AM
A blissful poem of love....this will do well in the contest, it is quite lovely! ~ Carrie
Muzzey Avatar
April 13, 2010 at 6:16 AM
A very nice write, such feeling. I enjoyed the read very much, good luck in the contest. Caryl
Goff Avatar
April 13, 2010 at 2:09 AM
love your choice of words! Doc! good work! jimbo
Palli Avatar
April 13, 2010 at 1:44 AM
So much feeling in your words!
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