Brian Strand Poet Verse

A Postlude

gentle one
       so
          friendly,too
what is it?:
is it
     innocence
in embryo-
thoughts
       transformed,
a subtext
echoed
from
    the
       past:
so remarkable
so unusual
yet
     low key,
instincts
        articulated
candid
pertinent
succinct
and to
       the point

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Caren Krutsinger June 13, 2018 at 1:31 AM I wish everything was written like this. Brian Strand June 13, 2018 at 2:39 AM Thanks Caren for your observation

Stephanie Warrillow June 11, 2018 at 7:13 PM It was short and beautiful. Brian Strand June 12, 2018 at 3:04 AM Thanks Stephanie

Heidi Sands June 11, 2018 at 5:45 AM This is excellent. I love it :) Brian Strand June 11, 2018 at 8:31 AM Good,thanks Heidi