A Positive Poem

wide eyed kids sprint home
parents scrounging for some change…
ice cream truck music

-24 Jun 2014-
“A Positive Poem Contest”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 6:27 PM
I sure remember those days. GOOD one!!
Kendrick Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 4:35 PM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara Brought a smile....
Nance Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 7:47 PM
Oh that is great!! that sure is positive and enjoyable, grats on first!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 3:26 PM
Hi David, this is such a clever write that I enjoyed reading! Congratulations on your well-deserved top win!
Smith Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 1:25 PM
Love this!!.. Congrats on a great win, David.. Hugs.. Arlene
Mehta Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 9:59 AM
Hahah, nice humor flowing like ice cream, david
A. Sharma Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 7:45 AM
Beauty in thoughts ,, positive attitude in ur poem is amazing David ! Congrats on top place!
Chutani Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 4:30 AM
David, nice and very innocently positive. Congrats for the win. Mohan
Gorelick Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 7:42 PM
My favorite poem of the day! So true of life..Ive done the scrounging many times. BG
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