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A Positive Poem

picking blueberries at sunrise, two in mouth, one in bowl.... skimpy pie filling
Sponsor: Elly Wouterser Contest: A Positive Poem Written: Friday, June 20, 2014

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Date: 6/28/2014 8:16:00 PM
haha yep I know how that is, but sure is delicious! Grats on your first place rank with such a neat poem :)
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Date: 6/28/2014 2:07:00 PM
Lol! LOVE IT!! Sara... Congrats on a great win!! This is one of my favorites!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/28/2014 11:18:00 AM
Oh my Sara ! Unimaginable beauty for me in this one ! Congrats on great win!
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Date: 6/28/2014 10:14:00 AM
Again a great win with this wonderful humor, sara
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Date: 6/28/2014 9:58:00 AM
Big congrats on your win!!!
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Date: 6/28/2014 5:04:00 AM
Sara, congrats for the win on Elly's positive theme. Mohan
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Date: 6/20/2014 9:43:00 PM
great write for us fruit lovers. also nice imagery. Mohan
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Date: 6/20/2014 8:37:00 PM
Dear Sara: Blueberries remind me of Clara my daughter-in-law who is so fond of this fruit. Nice senryu fragment. Leon
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