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A Positive Poem

picking blueberries
at sunrise, two in mouth, one in bowl....
skimpy pie filling  

Sponsor: Elly Wouterser
Contest: A Positive Poem
Written: Friday, June 20, 2014

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2014

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June 28, 2014 at 8:16 PM

haha yep I know how that is, but sure is delicious! Grats on your first place rank with such a neat poem :)

June 28, 2014 at 2:07 PM

Lol! LOVE IT!! Sara... Congrats on a great win!! This is one of my favorites!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

June 28, 2014 at 11:18 AM

Oh my Sara ! Unimaginable beauty for me in this one ! Congrats on great win!

June 28, 2014 at 10:14 AM

Again a great win with this wonderful humor, sara

June 28, 2014 at 9:58 AM

Big congrats on your win!!!

June 28, 2014 at 5:04 AM

Sara, congrats for the win on Elly's positive theme. Mohan

June 20, 2014 at 9:43 PM

great write for us fruit lovers. also nice imagery. Mohan

June 20, 2014 at 8:37 PM

Dear Sara: Blueberries remind me of Clara my daughter-in-law who is so fond of this fruit. Nice senryu fragment. Leon

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