A Positive Poem

LET THE GOOD TIMES ROLL

 Weekends are made for leisure so very, very sweet
 a Nature walk, picnic or fishing can't be beat
 time often spent enjoying life with those we love
 Weekends are made for leisure so very, very sweet
 memories as precious as call of the mourning dove
 little glories we never want to see the end of
 Weekends are made for leisure so very, very sweet
 a Nature walk, picnic or fishing can't be beat


 06 -13 -2014

A Triolet.
1 original, poem on the theme of "Let the good times roll
 (off your pen). 
Contest sponsor, Elly Wouterse
Theme,  "LET THE GOOD TIMES ROLL"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 4:32 PM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara
Lindley Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 5:45 PM
Thanks Sara. Always nice to read your comments and your writes!
Nance Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 7:52 PM
Sounds like a good time! Grats on your first place poem :)
Lindley Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 8:59 PM
Thanks you Casarah. "a Nature walk, picnic or fishing can't be beat"
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 5:23 PM
Congratulations dear RObert..my friend.. :D what a happy poem and well that triolet is ticking to my brain that i too should make one.. :D
Lindley Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 8:58 PM
Thanks Olive. My wife and our son keeps my life happy and it shows in my writes methinks.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 3:36 PM
This is exactly what I will be doing next weekend - going on a big picnic with all the frills! Robert, my friend, congratulations on another sweet win!
Lindley Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 8:57 PM
Thanks much my friend...
Devonshire Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 2:41 PM
Dear Robert, I love your nature walks. Let's make a deal; you can raid the picnic basket while I fish. Great poem and congratulations on your first-place win! Love, Carolyn
Lindley Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 3:30 PM
That is a deal my friend!! I am a real picnic basket raiding expert. I've always wondered why my gold medal hasn't arrived yet. Fishing is great fun too... Thanks my friend...
Smith Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 1:35 PM
aah! but we do live for the weekends, dear Robert. Congrats on a great win my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Lindley Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 3:28 PM
Thanks so much. Weekends in my life are for family time. We three can do things together!
Mehta Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 10:05 AM
I am enjoying Triolet like violets, congrats on the win, Robert
Lindley Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 3:26 PM
I thank you much Dr. Ram..
A. Sharma Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 7:51 AM
Very wonderful Robert ! Too positive on lovely weekends,, will always relish this every wkend! U hv inspired us all for everlasting celebrations ! Congrats on win n thanks !
Lindley Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 9:24 AM
Thanks my friend.
Chutani Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 4:38 AM
Robert, it is so positive to look forward to the weekends and the good times in it. Congrats for the win. Mohan
Lindley Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 9:19 AM
Thank you. Weekends for most Americans is time off work and time one can be with family. Always a great thing.
Carrillo Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 2:30 PM
What a sincere poem. All the things you say are true. There is nothing like spending quality time together, with the ones you love. You can have memories for years to come. Have a blessed day... Lucilla
Lindley Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 6:04 PM
Thanks my friend. Life, love and family the trio..
Nance Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 2:20 PM
Well done! Good luck in the contest, I think you will do well, this is cool :)
Lindley Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 6:03 PM
Thank you Casarah!
Mehta Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 9:39 AM
Lovely form with lovely, I think Triolet suits your expressions, Robert
Lindley Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 10:09 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram. My first ever write in that form...
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