A Portrait On the Wall

My father is a Christmas tree-
My mom, a silver ball.
I'm merely a portrait
Hanging on the wall.

But, my eyes see clearly
Father standing tall and strong
Holding fragile Mother dearly,
Whispering, "It won't be long

Until we see our brave son
Who died tragically that day
In a war unwon
By his beloved USA."

by Cherie Durbin

written for Miranda Lambert's "World of War:Vietnam" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Johnson Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 8:08 AM
Very unique entry to the contest. Good luck. Joyce
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April 14, 2011 at 11:18 AM
a very warmhearte and tender piece of poetry. thank you for your comment on summer gone by.
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