A PORTAL TO HELL

A PORTAL TO HELL

I was leery as I approached that gate
Rusted iron, painted over with black
Behind it I saw a jewel encrusted sky
Yet if a portal to Hell, did I just die
But I heard someone mutter nearby
A low voice warned me to stay back
I just saw a shadow, and so I’ll wait
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March 24, 2025 at 8:11 AM
What a hanging twist! I'd have hied it out of there, not looking back. Great poem on death and the odd circumstances that sometimes prevails therein. Heard voices this AM as I was quoting scripture - not as loud as the music that floated through the vents in my livingroom last year. PS: Congratulations, great provoker of thoughts.
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 2:47 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Howard :) - No hurry...stay :))) - hugs
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