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A Pond’s Melody

 Ripples’ softened pitch
 rises as ducks glide around,
 Turtles' bubbled chants resound
 till frogs’ croons abound;
 Insects’ buzz and splashing fish
 lead Polyphonic Choired Pond

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Len Gasun Date: 6/14/2025 1:44:00 AM SHOW ME A CHOKA Contest Judged: 6/10/2025 6:04:00 PM Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud Place: 2 ( up to 5th multi-w) Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 6/28/2025 6:28:00 PM Thanks dear poetess Nette. Hugs

Rob Carmack Date: 6/11/2025 7:52:00 AM Forgot about the turtles, yours may be the only one that included them. Congrats on your placement. Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 6/13/2025 6:45:00 PM Yes, because I love turtles my dear poet friend. I had pets before but I gave them to an adorable boy as gifts. Thanks for reading my poem and your warm congratulatory greetings. Hugs God bless you and your poetry.

Susan Ashley Date: 6/9/2025 12:02:00 PM Dear Len, I adore your imagery, especially "Turtles' bubbled chants resound" -wow! and the use of the word "Polyphonic". Your poem creates a serene yet vibrant scene of nestled in nature's beauty. Warmest wishes, my wonderful poet friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 6/13/2025 6:27:00 PM My deep gratitude and appreciation for appreciating my poem and your wonderful/encouraging words my dear poet friend Susan. Hugs

Sand Blown Date: 6/9/2025 9:18:00 AM very peaceful.....nice imaging......len Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 6/13/2025 6:26:00 PM My deep gratitude and appreciation for reading my poem and your wonderful and enoucraging words dear poet friend. Hugs