A Pond’s Melody

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19.35pm June 9, 2025

ducks on the pond

Contest: Show Me a Choka Contest

Sponsor : Nette Onclaud

Date Written: June 9, 2025 19.35pm

Ripples’ softened pitch rises as ducks glide around, Turtles' bubbled chants resound till frogs’ croons abound; Insects’ buzz and splashing fish lead Polyphonic Choired Pond

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Len Gasun

Date: 6/14/2025 1:44:00 AM

SHOW ME A CHOKA Contest Judged: 6/10/2025 6:04:00 PM Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud Place: 2 ( up to 5th multi-w)

Len Gasun
Date: 6/28/2025 6:28:00 PM

Thanks dear poetess Nette. Hugs

Rob Carmack

Date: 6/11/2025 7:52:00 AM

Forgot about the turtles, yours may be the only one that included them. Congrats on your placement.

Len Gasun
Date: 6/13/2025 6:45:00 PM

Yes, because I love turtles my dear poet friend. I had pets before but I gave them to an adorable boy as gifts. Thanks for reading my poem and your warm congratulatory greetings. Hugs God bless you and your poetry.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/9/2025 12:02:00 PM

Dear Len, I adore your imagery, especially "Turtles' bubbled chants resound" -wow! and the use of the word "Polyphonic". Your poem creates a serene yet vibrant scene of nestled in nature's beauty. Warmest wishes, my wonderful poet friend.. ~Susan

Len Gasun
Date: 6/13/2025 6:27:00 PM

My deep gratitude and appreciation for appreciating my poem and your wonderful/encouraging words my dear poet friend Susan. Hugs

Sand Blown

Date: 6/9/2025 9:18:00 AM

very peaceful.....nice imaging......len

Len Gasun
Date: 6/13/2025 6:26:00 PM

My deep gratitude and appreciation for reading my poem and your wonderful and enoucraging words dear poet friend. Hugs