A Pond’s Melody



 Ripples’ softened pitch
 rises as ducks glide around,
 Turtles' bubbled chants resound
 till frogs’ croons abound;
 Insects’ buzz and splashing fish
 lead Polyphonic Choired Pond

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Len Gasun

June 14, 2025 at 1:44 AM

SHOW ME A CHOKA Contest Judged: 6/10/2025 6:04:00 PM Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud Place: 2 ( up to 5th multi-w)

Len Gasun

June 28, 2025 at 6:28 PM

Thanks dear poetess Nette. Hugs

Rob Carmack

June 11, 2025 at 7:52 AM

Forgot about the turtles, yours may be the only one that included them. Congrats on your placement.

Len Gasun

June 13, 2025 at 6:45 PM

Yes, because I love turtles my dear poet friend. I had pets before but I gave them to an adorable boy as gifts. Thanks for reading my poem and your warm congratulatory greetings. Hugs God bless you and your poetry.

Susan Ashley

June 9, 2025 at 12:02 PM

Dear Len, I adore your imagery, especially "Turtles' bubbled chants resound" -wow! and the use of the word "Polyphonic". Your poem creates a serene yet vibrant scene of nestled in nature's beauty. Warmest wishes, my wonderful poet friend.. ~Susan

Len Gasun

June 13, 2025 at 6:27 PM

My deep gratitude and appreciation for appreciating my poem and your wonderful/encouraging words my dear poet friend Susan. Hugs