A Pond's Melody

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June 8, 2025

For Nette Onclaud's Contest : Show Me A Choka

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Beguiled breeze braces
tuneful drizzle of twilight,
symphony echoes in pool.
Rippling rhapsody
rolls in silent melody
with sunset in purple pond.

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Rob Carmack

Date: 6/11/2025 8:08:00 AM

You always deliver Subimal. Congrats.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/15/2025 1:40:00 AM

Thank you for reading and making so encouraging comments.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/11/2025 7:29:00 AM

drizzle of twilight…sunset in purple pond! Congrats!

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/15/2025 1:39:00 AM

Many thanks.