A Pond's Melody

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Written, June 7, 2025
For The Contest, Show Me A Choka"
Sponsor, Nette Onclaud

Painting (craiyon_143439)

its mirror shining reflecting the bluest sky small ripples, weaving, twining two white swans clinging weeping willows swaying nigh- the pond, with joy, is singing

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Rob Carmack

Date: 6/11/2025 7:39:00 AM

Congrats Sandra.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/11/2025 7:16:00 AM

Lovely, Sandra! Congrats!

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

Date: 6/10/2025 11:52:00 PM

Congratulations.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 6/10/2025 10:56:00 PM

The pond is singing - great melodic word flow. Congratulations, Sandra.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/7/2025 12:42:00 PM

"A Pond's Melody" is a lovely write with a pretty picture. I wish I was sitting under your tree. I enjoyed reading it. "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.........