Notes About The Poem

Written, June 7, 2025
For The Contest, Show Me A Choka"
Sponsor, Nette Onclaud

  Painting (craiyon_143439)

A Pond's Melody

its mirror shining
reflecting the bluest sky
small ripples, weaving, twining
two white swans clinging
weeping willows swaying nigh-
the pond, with joy, is singing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 6/11/2025 7:39:00 AM
Congrats Sandra.
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Date: 6/11/2025 7:16:00 AM
Lovely, Sandra! Congrats!
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Date: 6/10/2025 11:52:00 PM
Congratulations.
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Date: 6/10/2025 10:56:00 PM
The pond is singing - great melodic word flow. Congratulations, Sandra.
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Date: 6/7/2025 12:42:00 PM
"A Pond's Melody" is a lovely write with a pretty picture. I wish I was sitting under your tree. I enjoyed reading it. "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.........
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