Notes About The Poem

Written, June 7, 2025
For The Contest, Show Me A Choka"
Sponsor, Nette Onclaud

  Painting (craiyon_143439)

A Pond's Melody

its mirror shining
reflecting the bluest sky
small ripples, weaving, twining
two white swans clinging
weeping willows swaying nigh-
the pond, with joy, is singing
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Carmack Avatar
June 11, 2025 at 7:39 AM
Congrats Sandra.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 11, 2025 at 7:16 AM
Lovely, Sandra! Congrats!
Famuyiwa Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 11:52 PM
Congratulations.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 10:56 PM
The pond is singing - great melodic word flow. Congratulations, Sandra.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 12:42 PM
"A Pond's Melody" is a lovely write with a pretty picture. I wish I was sitting under your tree. I enjoyed reading it. "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.........
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